BRAINTRANSMISSION, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
I presume he is merely suggesting that Microsoft get "even more" generous and give away Windows XP for free. Make sense. Now with the "man-invented" recession underway, we need to find ways to save cost.
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at 07:40 on October 21st, 2008
BRAINTRANSMISSION, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 07:41 on October 21st, 2008
Is there a story to go along with your headline?
at 16:35 on October 21st, 2008
I presume he is merely suggesting that Microsoft get "even more" generous and give away Windows XP for free. Make sense. Now with the "man-invented" recession underway, we need to find ways to save cost.