Professor, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)




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at 09:18 on December 28th, 2008
I am not to sure where the news is in this post. Nice drawing.
at 10:05 on December 28th, 2008
I guess there is no news but the drawing is nice.
at 15:21 on December 28th, 2008
Yeah, that is a cool drawing.