Geoduniya, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)




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at 20:04 on November 11th, 2008
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Tessori family broke its silence when contacted by our correspondent and told that they are being victimize and harassed by police. They are being framed into several fake cases. They also informed our correspondent that many export orders and contracts have been cancelled and caused huge losses to national exchequer due to illegal cases filed against their family members and business. The Family Appeal to President Zardari and Prime Minister to intervene and help them against this atrocities towards their family (THE DAWNEWS). Thsi was the news i found regarding the tessori`s.By Zubair Chaudry
THE DAWNEWS,Karachi - Business community of Pakistan living inside and outside Pakistan are reluctant to do business in Pakistan after victimization of Pakistan`s leading business tycoon Kamran Tessori. A shock of wave spread inside business community when Kamran Tessori a respectable and receiver of national and international business award was arrested into fake cases fabricated by police and few individual s for personal grudge causing bad name to the government.