Gurgaon, New Delhi, India

by sundancemagic | July 11, 2008 at 11:10 pm | 126 views | 1 comment

New Delhi, capital of India

Add a comment Comments (1)

Sanjay Jha
needs improvement:

sundancemagic, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.

I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.

Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)

Add a comment

The content of this field is kept private and will not be shown publicly.

July 11, 2008 at 11:10 pm by sundancemagic, 126 views, 1 comment

closeSign in to NowPublic

is reporting from