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If one finds satisfaction in what he has and enjoys every moment he lives?
Are you the one who falls in this category?
at 01:21 on August 27th, 2008
Ratansaini, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help if you follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)
at 01:52 on August 27th, 2008
I have moderated it now.
at 01:56 on August 27th, 2008
at 01:27 on August 27th, 2008
Thanks for your suggestions.
at 04:48 on August 27th, 2008
Well i didn't see the story before moderating, but it is not very much opinion.
For myself: i'm happy in this world although it could be better. The world needs improvement, respect for people, animals, the planet will bring more happiness for everybody.
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