Whirlygig, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. The way it is written now is risking looking like spam, could you amend it to read more like a news story? Thanks
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My brother and I are finishing a feature documentary PRIDE OF LIONS about the people of Sierra Leone. PRIDE OF LIONS shows humanity at its worst, but more importantly it illuminates the best in humanity. The Sierra Leoneans choose forgiveness over contempt, peace instead of revenge, and replace hatred towards their oppressors with determination and hope for the future.
www.prideoflionsfilm.com
We highlight in our film Sierra Leonean Dr. Barrie and the work he is doing through Global Action Foundation. An article was published on 11/24 in The London Telegraph and the BBC aired a special program on Panorama "Addicted to Aid" where Dr. Barrie was profiled as a Sierra Leonean making a difference with aid that is fully funding his clinic and programs through Global Action Foundation. www.goact.org
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at 08:01 on November 25th, 2008
This almost sound like SPAM or an add.