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Niyigira Zacque- playing with fire
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My name is Njz, I have two brothers and two uncles. One uncle's name was Jonh, he was a king but he didn't have a prince. And another uncle's name was drud. Uncle Jonh was the oldest son in my grandfather's family. My granddaddy had magic that can do anything on earth. Before he died he gave all his magic to his three sons. Since they were three sons he decide that they should both use their magic only once. Granddaddy was greate king. He would control anything. He could do anything with his magic except to make someone old or young. He can only control things. If he says earth must turn around then earth will turn around. If he says die, you will die. He was a well respected man. Even in his death, he could always come and visit but he couldn't control anything. My father and I, lives in the United states of America. But we were all born in one big city of Africa. I and my father came to the US to visit my friend, his whole family were dead, whey where killed by the airplane crush. His name is Jonas. I was watching FIFA with my dad in South African. Very dangerously, My dad and I losed each other my dad looked for me and I looked for him. I was 10 years old. I had to go home all by my self. When I was walking in the road a car came behind me when I thought that I was crossing the road and nock me down. The blood was flowing like water coming from sink. Jonas Came from no where and rescued me. I'm his friend so I had to go see him. I'm under 18 years old so I had to go with my dad. It seemed like we were going to stay for a long time before we go back. I had to plan in that long time what i would do. First, I had to go to school study and go to college. I guess most of my life I will be in the US. There goes, my first day of the US school. I had no idea on what the teachers were teaching. I new a little English but I didn't know how to read or write English. God, I was very nervous. My second day in school, I was okay. I had no other friends in the US except for Jonas. Jonas Was already in college and I was in high school. I always sit alone do everything alone. I was walking in the around the school, there I saw this girl she looked like Asian. She was very beautiful, When I saw her I already knew what to say to her. Then I began to like school. I went to her and said hello She didn't say anythingI looked deep down in her eyes and saw sadness in her eyes, it almost made me cry as well. I secretly followed her to see where she lives. I saw a man in her backyard practicing karate. After school, I saw her going home with a guy. I thought well that must be her boyfriend I didn't care whether he was her boyfriend all I new for sure is that I loved her. next day, when I saw her I when and said Hello She said Hi I clossed my eyes and said finally. I opened my eyes and said What's your name I had already gone. I couldn't take it anymore since I new where she lives. But that man that was practicing karate in her backyard could be dangerous I said to my self. I went to her house and saw her sitting in her backyard alone. I went to her and said hi, my name in Njz. We have algebra class together, remember. She said yes and why are you here? I said I came to see if you can help me with homework. She said okay but she was still very sad. It seemed like she had a problem. I asked her if she could go out on a date with me she said yes. Back to my family, I and my dad had almost stayed in the US like 2 years old, I was 15 years old. I came to the US when I was like 13 years old and half. Granddad's appeared to me and told me a secret tha might help me in the future, he gave me the ball looking very shiny. He said if I appear to you just kick it in my face and you will know if it's me or not, if it's me you will stay the same but if it's not me you will know what to do. Back to my reality, I already knew how to speak write and read English But not very well. We recieved a later from my village saying that my dad and I had to go back to Africa. Uncle Jonh was dead, my dad had to go and give the permission to bury king jonh my uncle. When we received that later everything in my mind was gone. Uncle jonh had so many friends, he was my very good friend even though he was my uncle. I sat and thought through all those things. How can a king dy without sickness. When we got there my father and I, The police arested dad. People said that my dad killed uncle jonh even. In court, uncle drud was against us, too. Uncle drud came to see dad at the cell and told dad why did you do it. You killed your own blood brother why he was sounding very disapointed and crying. But uncle jonh had so many soldiers. We found a good lawyer. In court, the defender asked dad where were you when king jonh died? dad answered I was in the US ancle drud said he wasn't in US, he was in king jonh's palace. I immidiately knew who did it. For me to be so sure I had to hire some US lawyers to find out secretly. I had to go back to see my girl. I called her that I was going to come to see her. When I got to her house, I saw her sitting quitly. I asked her what the problem was. She was not rude neither was she angry. She was just full of sorrow, pains in her heart. She said I loved a guy and one day, my dad saw us kissing and the next thing I new was my boyfriend was at the hospital. When I went to see him at the hospital to see him, he said ,"your dad did this to me and he warned me never to see you again" and her father told her that she was adupted . I said to my self oho, at least it is not like my dad's situation Then she said that she said that her father raped her. I said to my self that Then I'm realy in the middle of fire she told me that her dad told her that he will take her back to China and marry her. Her dad is like a rock, guns can't shoot him. I as a young man I had to think of what to do. I received a mail paper saying You have been wanted by your father. It seemed like my father have been out of jail. I guess my secret lawyers have worked hard. Now I have to go check on my father, but I first have to help my girl from the evil guy. I went to see her and she told me that there is a way out that we can fight her dad. I said to her A man who jumps from building to building, A man who catchs a bullet with his teeth and his fingers How do you what us to fight him. He was a very old man, he was like 49 years old. The solution is for us to go and learn the martial arts where he learned. I said But do you know where he learned she said that her uncle knew her dad's master. The guy who adupted her's name is Chong Chin Wei. I gues this is a big thing than I thought. Her uncle's name is Mei chin. I had to go and learn the martial arts. I went and finished 3 years for trainning. To be as good as Chon Wei I had to train every day for 30 years. In the middle of 4th year I recieved a later from my dad that he's about to be a king and he wants me to be there to as a firest son for the sake of the people. I had to go with Lisa Lesica. Lisa Jesica is the love of my life, The girl I'm fighting for. I had to go with her to my village. It's like that Chin Wei guy has magic, he came after us. "What a dangerous situation Help us lord", I said. The guy got crushed by the airplane. The airplane that he was in was my father's, so I had to tell my father to crush it and see if the Wei chon guy would dy. He didn't dy he came and raped up the whole palace of uncle Jonh when he tried to kill the king my father, he became like a rock. He couldn't talk no to mention to move. I went and pushed him, as he falls down my dad stopped breathing. Uncle Drud was in jail for murder, He killed uncle Jonh and tried to put it on my daddy. Now that daddy is dead dead, uncle Drud is coming from the cell. What is he going to do now that he is out of jail. Uncle Drud's magic can really turn thing around and change things but it can't control the whole world like granddaddy's. Uncle Drud before killing uncle Jonh, he first took his magic and killed him and now Uncle Drud can use his two magic and be invisible. He can kill and nobody would know. Now I'm scared that he might just kill me. Daddy's magic is gone to back to granddaddy because dad has use them to kill the karate guy. Uncle Drud's magic can be used only two times. I have to find something that can make him use his magic. If he brings back alive the Chin Chon Wei guy, Then daddy's magic will come go back to grandfather and grandfather will Be alive again. If grandfather comes to alive again, The whole world will be a maess. He will come very different and dangerous. He might the whole universe into fire. Uncle Drud will be controlling him. Uncle Drud the devil himself. I and my brothers have to do all we can before he find the body that was killed by daddy's magic. The night is on. Today, Uncle Drud was search for something and I assume he was searching for the body that was killed by the Shapmagic. Shapmagic was my daddy's magic. Next night is on, I think to today was the final of all of our fight. Grandfather came to visit and told me that will huppen and he told me where I can rescue him from the hands of his son. Grandfather came and told me to follow him where he goes. As I was walking with him I saw some weird people. I thought that could this be Uncle Drud that is changed him self into granddad. I stopped and called hime and said granddaddy yes he said turn and look at me there is something i want you to do for me.



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Friv games (not verified)at 23:40 on May 17th, 2011
Thank you for sharing, I like it very much
at 12:19 on May 28th, 2011
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