pakistanpal, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)



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at 22:49 on January 5th, 2009
Hi, This is again a copy and paste job. Can you please write something of your original. You have copied this article from Te Daily Times. This has been published here. http://www.dailytimes.com.pk/default.asp?page=2008\12\29\story_29-12-2008_pg3_5 . Please stop this practice and write something your own. Thanks
at 22:56 on January 5th, 2009
This was a pretty good summation of some problems appearing to having in the east.
It is scary as these countires have nukes. I am frightened that othe terror states like Iran will havenukes too. They are crazy enough to use them too.