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Pakistan: Ten Killed In Lahore Blast
by voiceforpeace | April 10, 2008 at 07:56 am | 413 views | 11 comments
Continued violence has claimed another ten lives in Lahore, the second biggest city of Pakistan. Several people were killed in violence in Karachi, the biggest city of Pakistan during the violence a day earlier.
According to reports, ten people were killed and other 20 injured after a massive blast took place in a scrap market in Misri Shah area of Lahore.
Majority of the injured included schoolgirls. The blast occurred in a godown located in scrap market. Police officials said blast occurred due to gas cylinder. Blast caused the roof and walls of godown to fall while body parts scattered around the blast site.
Officials of law enforcing agencies and police rushed to the spot and cordoned off the area. Rescue workers have started taking the injured to hospitals. Death toll could rise due to critical condition of some of the injured.
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April 10, 2008 at 07:56 am by voiceforpeace, 413 views, 11 comments
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at 08:13 on April 10th, 2008
voiceforpeace, I like this story. It's good stuff.
at 10:05 on April 10th, 2008
Hi voiceforpeace the bottom half of this story seems to be copied from http://www.paktribune.com/news/index.shtml?199308
You need to make it clear which parts are your own words and which are not.
at 10:19 on April 10th, 2008
Yes Vinny is right. Please use the highlight tool, or clearly indicate where you found the material in your piece.
at 10:21 on April 10th, 2008
Voiceforpeace, this and at least one other story have sections that are direct copy and pastes from other sources.
You need to be very clear where the information is coming from, otherwise it looks like plagiarism.
at 11:18 on April 10th, 2008
I am sorry for the mistake, but I have still learning the correct methods of sending the story. Actually in Pakistan most of the newspapers have been taking materials from one antoher. It is not the original story of Pak Tribune. I take meterials from various sources. But give me time till when I learn the correct method. I am try to mention the source from which I have been taking the meterial.
Thank you very much for guiding me to the correct method.
at 11:29 on April 10th, 2008
Hi voiceforpeace I don't why you don't just use the highlight tool to show what parts of your post are from other sites. I see on your latest post you have copied an entire article from the Nation, while I accept you have mentioned them in the post it still would be much better if you used the highlight tool and did not copy the entire copyrighted article.I again offer you my help if you need it for using the highlight tool. Regards Vinny
at 11:39 on April 10th, 2008
Thank you very my dear Vinny, I shall certainly be needing your help. Now I have decided to rely on own meterials instead of using the others. But sometime some news catch my attention.
Dear Vinny, again thank you very much for offering the help. I shall be very grateful I you may guide me. I just want to share some hidden and interesting news with you.
A lot of thanks
at 11:47 on April 10th, 2008
Please feel free to use the NP messaging service to contact me about anything I can do to help you, there should be a link on my member page to send me a private message.
at 12:20 on April 10th, 2008
Dear Vinny
Thank you very much. I shall be certainly in contact with you. A lot of thanks
at 12:50 on April 10th, 2008
Hi Voice for Peace, again, as in my earlier note to you, also feel free to contact me for help with Highight tool. A note: although you say that newspapers, etc. routinely copy from each other, international copyright covenants prohibit that.
Outside of legal stuff, it's confusing to readers when they look at your pieces and think that you wrote it all and it's original work. And, it's also, frankly, insulting to other members who write original content. When a Good Stuff flag is given for work that's actually done by others on other publications and presented as original material, it creates negativity and unhappiness.
As you've been with us for awhile, I'm sure that the Highlight Tool is something that you will find as easily adaptable for your use. You navigate this system very well, actually! :)
Where are you, BTW?
at 13:15 on April 10th, 2008
Dear PEP
Thank you very much for your kind advice. In future I shall concentrate on my own areas. I have been trying to learn the highlight method. I shall overcome this problem very soon. Again thank you very much for your kind advice. I belong to a very backward areas. I have been learning something while remaining attached with you people. You have given me a good advice. I am really grateful to you.