pakistanpal, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)



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at 23:20 on January 5th, 2009
Hi, You have again copied this article from another source. http://www.buzzvines.com/partners-crime. I have been repeatedly requesting you to write you own stuff and not just do copy and past. If you will continue doing this under our guidelines i will be forced to take an action, Thanks