agora, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to remove this flag.
I wasnt sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Please review What Makes News News. It can really help ify ou follow the old "W5" news formula -- making sure you have answered the questions: Who? What? Where? When? And Why? (You might want to check out our J-Tips for more help.)





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at 08:13 on January 28th, 2009
This story is rather sketchy don't you think? When, why, what, who and how...
at 11:05 on January 28th, 2009
Details of the leak were released in newspapers which include the Ottawa Sun, the Edmonton Sun, and discussed on Ottawa's 580 CFRA Talk Radio, and detailed by the Sierra Club. A radioactive leak is not "newsworthy" enough. Are you out of your mind? Call the Sierra Club yourself, then start telling me that this is not newsworthy enough.