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at 13:18 on June 9th, 2008
Push, I think your story has potential but needs some improvement. I've
got a few suggestions, and if you give them a try, I'd be happy to
remove this flag.
I wasn't sure what was newsworthy in this story. News should always be about posting current stuff - new things you've discovered.
Rather than a press release, please write a review of the exhibit or show.
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