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Street children refers to children for whom the street
more than their family has become their real home. It includes children who
might not necessarily be homeless or without families, but who live in
situations where there is no protection, supervision, or direction from
responsible adults.
Street children throughout the world are subjected to
physical abuse by police or have been murdered outright, as governments treat
them as a blight to be eradicated-rather than as children to be nurtured and
protected. They are frequently detained arbitrarily by police simply because
they are homeless, or criminally charged with vague offenses such as loitering,
vagrancy, or petty theft. They are tortured or beaten by police and often held
for long periods in poor conditions. Girls are sometimes sexually abused,
coerced into sexual acts, or raped by police. Street children also make up a
large proportion of the children who enter criminal justice systems and are
committed finally to correctional institutions (prisons) that are
euphemistically called schools, often without due process.
In India, 90% of
street children are working children with regular family ties who live with
their families, but are on the streets due to poverty and their parents'
unemployment. The remaining 10% are either working children with few family
ties who view the streets as their homes or abandoned and neglected children
with no family ties. The National Policy for Children established in 1974
emphasizes the provision of equal opportunities for the development to all
children during their growing years. Policy stresses programs to maintain,
educate, and train destitute children and orphans. Policy is also to protect
children against neglect, cruelty, and exploitation, but this is only on paper.
An UNICEF study found that almost 40,000 children die every day in developing
countries, 25% of whom are in India. Studies in
some major cities indicate that the street children in India are of
moderate health status, suffering from various chronic diseases and
undernourishment. They are deprived of all health programs, but seem to prefer
government hospitals in case of dire need. Street children often have to pay
for water. Almost 97% in Calcutta, 99% in Bangalore, and 90% in Madras reported
having no access to toilet and bathing facilities; 83% in Kanpur, however,
had access to such facilities. Nothing has been heard in recent years of the
National Children's Board established in 1975. Apparently the board has
gradually waned. Various schemes were planned in 1992 by the Union Welfare
Ministry in association with UNICEF. Extending extra health facilities,
establishing nutrition programs, providing vocational training, protecting
children from abuse, distributing dry-food polypacks, providing night shelters,
providing ration cards, and creating bathing and toilet facilities would go far
in improving the quality of life and the future of street children in India.
Instead on waiting for these organizations to wake up
and take some action to help these beautiful children. We should try and make a
difference to at least the ones around us. Five families can get together and contribute
money for education and support for at least two street children. It won’t cost
you much. Very little and am sure cheaper than your weekend dinner bill or even
shopping bill.
Please be a part of a new revolution and remember that
when you can start it, then why wait for someone else. Please don’t take their
smiles away from them.................
smkovalinsky
New York, New York, United States
Spydermonkey
huntsville, Alabama, United States
158
St. Louis, Missouri, United States
anuradhadesai
chennai, India
Noel Jameel Abdullah
phoenix, Arizona, United States
Delilah
Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, United States
Barry Artiste
Vancouver, Canada
Sputnic
London, United Kingdom
info.star
london, United Kingdom
Most RecentMost Recommended Comments (12)
at 07:56 on August 15th, 2009
excellant story about children in 3rd world countries like India. It sure woke me up in a hurry. Don't these countries realize that children are the future, and a valuable asset for work forces.
Food, shelter, love, and education are birthrights.
at 13:57 on July 31st, 2009
This feels like a good start to a great story. Keep working on it!
at 11:08 on July 1st, 2009
#1. clean free water for everyone in the world.
at 11:44 on July 23rd, 2009
Very informative story.
at 04:32 on August 4th, 2009
I agree with Spydermonkey, archita. Perhaps a newer story is in order?
at 09:05 on August 12th, 2009
Very important subject; well-written piece.
at 19:25 on August 13th, 2009
Very moving story and totally true but be careful on cirtain areas, while you are right that everyone should help what of the government that is obligated to help. What are they doing? as far as I can see nothing. The government of India is one of the most corrupt(at least visably whereas others hide it a bit better) The amount of money that goes into building and furnishing swanky hotels, the provision and multi billion pound industry generated by bollywood and the fashion industry is obscene using the politest of words. Why is all this money not put to good use? simple, because it does not benifit the government. The fat cats love to line their own pockets its as simple and complicated as that.
at 20:15 on August 13th, 2009
I just uploaded some vids to show comparison of living standards, its amazing, and the Indian government ALLOWS this to happen.
at 21:08 on August 13th, 2009
thank you
at 21:08 on August 13th, 2009
thank you
at 21:11 on August 13th, 2009
i do hope so....will surely work on something
at 21:53 on August 24th, 2009
No child should have to endear any hurt