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A Veteran's Day Poem
by Rory Cripps | November 11, 2009 at 06:48 am
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Never On The Horizon by Rory Cripps
Don't ask us how it started
Don't ask us if it's ever gonna end
And don't ask us to read it for you
Don't ask us when it's safe again
We'll tell you it's like a ruling
by fools that aren't fooling
It's like rolling seven when you're down to a dime
and holding aces and eights all the time . . . .
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Most RecentMost Recommended Comments (23)
at 07:28 on November 11th, 2009
Yep that poem says it all
at 08:31 on November 11th, 2009
ACP: Coming from someone with your experiences . . .that means a lot!
at 08:09 on November 11th, 2009
I sat next to a beautiful young man on a plane home on leave. My heart will never forget him.
We need to see them more...hear from them ...honor them and give them all we possibly can
for what they do.
at 08:35 on November 11th, 2009
QueensHart: I won't tell anyone what a thoughtful and caring person you really are . . . .
at 13:38 on November 11th, 2009
Thank You. : ) I send you a hug!
at 16:06 on November 11th, 2009
QueensHart: Thank you so much! Even unsophisticated and ignorant provincials, such as myself, will admit to needing a hug at times. Indeed, I need all the hugs that I can get . . . and so does everyone else whether they admit it or not.
at 08:24 on November 11th, 2009
Great poem Rory
at 08:32 on November 11th, 2009
Barry: Thanks! Did I at least get some of it right?
at 10:24 on November 11th, 2009
Beautiful, Rory.
at 10:33 on November 11th, 2009
SMK: Well thank you so much! I guess the poem could also be titled :How the hell did I wind up here?
at 12:26 on November 11th, 2009
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ACES AND EIGHTS:
Source: en.wikipedia.org
at 12:50 on November 11th, 2009
Lovely work
at 13:27 on November 11th, 2009
Thanks Amy!
at 13:40 on November 11th, 2009
The truth is................. a thoughtful and caring person posted this poem and the pix.
at 13:53 on November 11th, 2009
QueensHart: JEEZ! I'd give you my varsity jacket if I had one! lol!
at 14:00 on November 11th, 2009
Awe...........thanks your poem is really lovely,well said Rory.
at 14:30 on November 11th, 2009
jazzyjazzy: Thank you! And an Awe ...... to you too!
at 19:04 on November 11th, 2009
Thank you for the heartfelt sentiments in poetry.
at 05:17 on November 12th, 2009
a211423: And thank you too!
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8mileshi (not verified)at 17:22 on November 18th, 2009
I wanted to recognize an honor a friend, a Nam Vet, and your poem was the second one I read...from there I knew I could pass along my deepest intent. I've now shared it four times an the one shocking response was from my 17 year old daughter...You successfully wrote through time.Bravo an Thanks!
at 19:25 on November 18th, 2009
8mileshi: Thank you for your thoughtful comment! I've got a confession to make here: The basis of my poem was constructed many years ago and it had a lot to do with Vietnam Vets . . . .It also had to do with the guilt of those, such as myself, that could have enlisted and would have been accepted in a heart beat but chose not to serve. My word is true when I say that I will go to my grave with "survivor guilt". I have nothing but complete and total admiration and respect for anyone that is willing to put their lives on the line for the American ideal . . . .
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8mileshi (not verified)at 03:52 on November 20th, 2009
Admirable Confession, Rory... Conscience is the root of all true courage; if a man would be brave let him obey his conscience. James Freeman Clarke
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8mileshi (not verified)at 04:09 on November 20th, 2009
btw, I shared your reply with the same 17 yr. old and I'll quote..."an look what he just contributed to the healing of one of our deepest scars" Sierra...guess they're not consistently 'brain dead'' )